No Title, I recorded this night ;)

[FiZz]

This song actually doesn't has a name yet, so what.
I made this song during the night, and the lyrics don't really run in step with the beat, but what ever. At first I liked the song, but now I hate it, cause it isn't really my style of music, but my electric guitar was lying somewere else

Uhm... well, still tell me what you think:
[url=http://www.q2u.nl/personal/fizz/music/Untitled.mp3]The no title song by me[/url]

[Smithers2003X]

in my opinion, acoustic guitar kicks the sh*t out of electric. this a obviously a very controversial thing to say in a forum full of heavy metal maniacs... the song was ok. a bit too pop for my taste but i think you have a lot of potential as a singer. keep it up.

[FiZz]

Thanks!

Acoustic guitars are the best, no doubt about that! But to really express myself I need an electric guitar because of the power of it, and the extreem feedback's you can create. That is also why I love Nirvana!

But for my acoustic guitar, I'm totally into K's Choice (the more acoustic songs I mean).

BTW, I have changed my opinion, I don't hate the song anymore, but I don't know, it's just not really me and that bothers me.

[hacked_to_pieces]

not bad your voice is pretty good. The song was pretty good, however its too commerical for my taste but overall you have some talent keep at it man.

[MxShredder]

It's a good song, but.... is the bass MIDI? it sounds like it... if not the bassist is almost robotic sounding

[GimmeSlack12]

This is pretty good, the flow is consistent, and as for the structure I think its pretty unique, simple but unique.

I don't think this is commercial at all, some tough critics in here!

[SkaterNick14]

good song but your need to work on your breathing when you sing and your bends are out of tune

[FiZz]

Originally posted by SkaterNick14
good song but your need to work on your breathing when you sing and your bends are out of tune

I know, my breathing sucks. I've just read an articil here about breathing and singing exercices and I'm going to practice on that.

For the bends, I know... Those little pingel (???) parts are always just improvised so then I mess up frequently. I'm working on that to

Thanks for all the comments (so far).

[cas]

cool.. i like your voice, reminds me of the ramones

Not bad.

[BassMan182]

Originally Posted by FiZz

This song actually doesn't has a name yet, so what.
I made this song during the night, and the lyrics don't really run in step with the beat, but what ever. At first I liked the song, but now I hate it, cause it isn't really my style of music, but my electric guitar was lying somewere else

Uhm... well, still tell me what you think:
[url=http://www.q2u.nl/personal/fizz/music/Untitled.mp3]The no title song by me[/url]

thanks for convincing me not to even bother listening...