Echo

Threepwood · 09-03-2003, 02:37 PM

This is a little different then most of my songs, but tell me what you think...

Echoes of your confidence
Are all I am.
Am I of relevance?
Of greater plan?

I plan to build a raft out to sea.
If I asked would you come with me.

I think you would.
I’d ask if I could.

Shadows of deliverance
You hide away.
Questions of benevolence.
But not today.

I plan to build a raft out to sea.
If I asked would you come with me.

I think you would.
I’d ask if I could.

Makeshift heart.
My shroud, now torn apart.
Makeshift heart.
My shroud, in broken shards.

Threepwood · 09-05-2003, 08:21 PM

Anyone?

09-05-2003, 11:55 PM

i hate to say it but it's lame, too much crying.

Lowridenn · 09-06-2003, 12:22 AM

It's very moody and jumpy. There isn't much there. Not much I can say about it.

hihatx · 12-14-2004, 02:33 PM

there is already a song called echo but i admire you talent

09-03-2003, 02:37 PM	#1
Threepwood Let it Burst and Bloom Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Atlanta Posts: 151	Echo This is a little different then most of my songs, but tell me what you think... Echoes of your confidence Are all I am. Am I of relevance? Of greater plan? I plan to build a raft out to sea. If I asked would you come with me. I think you would. I’d ask if I could. Shadows of deliverance You hide away. Questions of benevolence. But not today. I plan to build a raft out to sea. If I asked would you come with me. I think you would. I’d ask if I could. Makeshift heart. My shroud, now torn apart. Makeshift heart. My shroud, in broken shards. Last edited by Threepwood; 09-05-2003 at 08:21 PM.

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09-05-2003, 08:21 PM	#2
Threepwood Let it Burst and Bloom Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Atlanta Posts: 151	Anyone?

09-05-2003, 11:55 PM	#3
king buzzcok Guest Posts: n/a	i hate to say it but it's lame, too much crying.

09-06-2003, 12:22 AM	#4
Lowridenn With your powers combined Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: California Posts: 1,165	It's very moody and jumpy. There isn't much there. Not much I can say about it.

12-14-2004, 02:33 PM	#5
hihatx the sex pistols Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: usa Posts: 1,208	there is already a song called echo but i admire you talent