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Old 11-05-2016, 09:21 PM   #301
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This Sites Dying , Your Flows Dead.
Can't type a verse , So you leave Instead.
You Leave The Rappers On This Site On Read.
Acting like a hoe , What's up with that?
Straight to your head like a baseball bat ,
Keep The Site Alive Could You Manage That?
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Old 11-29-2016, 05:01 AM   #302
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Post Unstoppable - manchild

It's pretty long, about 303 words. This one has 71% rhyme density. (if I calculated right). (Rap God was 37.28%)

Iím living my life,
Giving my life,
To rhythm and rhyme,
Iíll spit till it shines,
Cause this is divine,
Listen, Iím right,
Hidden, I write,
Existing in time,
With rhythm and rhyme,
Feeling the shine,
Believing in life,
Chilliní, I find,
The villains are kind,
But this is my life,
So give me my time,
A kid in my prime,
To live in the life,
With rhythm and rhyme.

And Iím not gonna stop this,
Iím hot when I drop this,
Lost it, but I got this,
Rock it, and I want this,
And Iím not just talking,
As a matter of fact,
I rap and attack,
In a castle of glass,
Throwing gravel en mass,
The walls rattle but last,
Past the battle of raps,
But Iím shackled in class,
As I practice my craft,
In talent, I lack,
But Iím not gonna flop,
When I drop on the spot,
Cause Iíve got what I wantÖ

I come home from the record store,
With epic scores,
I let it roar,
And set the bar,
Iím getting bored,
So I put my verse on a message board,
I step, Perform,
And Let it roar,
Cause Iím getting bored.

A little kid,
Spitting sick,
Just thirteen,
But Iím thirsty,
For recognition,
So I get up spitting,
Wrecking rhythm,
Rap a fella,
Acapella,

Like:

Iím a prodigy,
If youíre blocking me,
You probably
Ought to be,
Walking off from me,
If youíre knocking me,
It honestly,
Donít bother me,
Thereís no stopping me,
Iíve got my odyssey,
I spit prophecies,
And Socratesí,
Philosophies,
Dropping the,
Mythology,
And rockin jeans,


And Iím right,
Thereís no stopping,
When I write,
I get rocking,
Through the nights,
I be dropping,
From the Heights,
To the bottom,
And Iím right,
Thereís no stopping me,
Impossibly,
Dropping heat,
Unstoppably.

IDK not my fav. I've written so far.
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Old 11-29-2016, 06:16 PM   #303
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Say I can't be stopped,
But I never even started,
say I'm hot when I drop,
But it's not what my heart's in,
The fact is,
this is practice,
spitting rap is,
what keeps me from drowning,
my feet keep on pounding,
to the beats, the sound is drowning,
the town is frowning,
as I wound up,
Found in,
The ground, up,
Like powder,
Clowning,
Around and,
Hounding,
Me down,
Howling,
From the comedy,
Calling me,
A wanna be,
In all modesty,
You’re never stopping me,
At the starting line,
I don’t think I’ll start in time,
The art of rhyme,
Compositions,
They stop me spitting,
Playing,
The lame things,
Admonitions,
“Drop the rhythms,
Stop the spitting,
Awful singing,
You’ll end up locked in prison,”
We’ll I’ll stop this thing when,
I start decomposition,
Ambitious,
To chicken,
Mood swinging,
Like Ted Wilson,
Or Glen Miller,
Vicious,
Predictions,
Petitions like,
“End this thing,”
Request switches,
Like friends ditching,
Renditions,
Of traditions,
Linguistics,
Twisting,
Mathematician,
Of read rhythms,
Phonetician,
Get set in,
A logician,
Cognition,
Auditions,
Stop, listen,
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Old 11-30-2016, 05:06 AM   #304
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My mind is a powerhouse

It's like Chernobyl

It spews its intelligence

Like it spews its radiation

If it were the 13th century

I could have been a noble
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Old 04-18-2017, 10:03 PM   #305
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My First Lyrics

Money equals greed, greed equals power,

I gotta bounce, i donít call her

Carefree i donít need the stress

Mad power like macbeth,

Knowledge is power information is key

You are water wild so i guess your pussy empty

Got the power to many more

Need i say more out in singapore

And power means a price

You make a nigga sing songs nice

My staff look like it been crafted by a higher power

Not too many is touching, double m g this summer

Showing my lyrical skill and lyrical power,

It's like we both forgot what we were fightin' for

A country in power

And i just want to hold her

(Don't steal it it is under my name)
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Old 04-19-2017, 01:31 AM   #306
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flush is a retard and his mother ate babies
fucked his neighbour's cat, now that pussy got rabies
if he ever leave the basement he be looking super shady
probably an autist so he'll never touch a lady
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Old 04-19-2017, 01:31 AM   #307
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also lol at the faggot who can't rhyme for shit above me
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Old 04-19-2017, 05:35 AM   #308
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flush is a retard and his mother ate babies
fucked his neighbour's cat, now that pussy got rabies
if he ever leave the basement he be looking super shady
probably an autist so he'll never touch a lady
That's disgusting. Fucking animals, that is not kosher.
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Old 04-19-2017, 05:37 AM   #309
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Plus, my lyrics are a genre. But I won't tell you which genre now since you were rude.
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Old 04-21-2017, 04:31 PM   #310
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DISCLAIMER: This is an actual recorded song, I just wanted to post the lyrics here because they are epic (just kidding)


I am fully operational/
The complete domination/
Is commenced by this song/
I am back from my vacation/
And when you check out the bass then you are like your Girl/
Because you feel Vibration/
These Wannaberappers tryna convince me they're Gees/
But I ain't buying that shit/
Like their CDs/
Don't mess with me cause I got the knowledge/
That you motherfuckers are not gonna top it/
You better get into cover coz now you are watching/
Doubletimes coming at you, in supersonic/
Kill the motherfuckers that are trying to be spitting they will never get my level I am easily just killing Rap because today's rappers say they're criminal and shit/
But spraying was the only illegal thing they did/
And they're actually technically worse and they will never be as good as me/
Coz they're fake-ass/
Like Nicki Minaj's booty/
What I am can't be expressed by Science/
Because I am hot and cool at the same time/
Trust me if you see me you better run and hide/
Coz I ain't playing games apart from Battlefield Hardline/
This is lyrical violation/
Typical annihilation/
I ain't fakin/
I'm just saying/
I'm just slaying MCs because they are often tryna make me write their fuckin tracks but I don't give a fuck about these dying faggots/
I declare war/
To all the MCs/
That have either gotten soft or mainstream/
Coz if there one thing that I hate more than snitches than it is/
Plastic Mainstreams Fake-Ass bitches/
I slit their throats/
With a butterfly knife/
Coz I got more butterflies/
Than a caterpillar cocoon/
I destroy things so easily as they were made from Lego/
So when I come to them their hood looks like Aleppo/
Leggo/
King in the buis like Jacko/
Now I am ready to take over/
The Game over night/
That means Game Over/
Coz you take so much drugs/
And got the Tourettesyndrom/
That makes your Junkierap ununderstandable/
You're stoned all day long/
You got more weed/wheat//
Than a Damn Grainfarm/
I hit you and you fly in the air like Rey Park/
If I punch Uppercuts it's like a Shojuken of Ken Masters/
Yo/
I'm spitting fire like an active Volcano/
And Rap is my playground/

[Hook]
I record in one take/
Give me a mic and a beat/
And I'm fabricating a Masterpiece/
Tell me one rapper that can catch up to me/
In the categories Flow, Vocabulary and speed/

Did you like it?
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Old 04-21-2017, 04:34 PM   #311
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You are not a hero/
Only coz you got zero subs on YouTube/
One could say that you are Sub zero/
People greet you with "'sub zero?"/
And I mean everyone/
Not just the rude teens/
My daily routines: I brush my teeth, kill MCs and produce beats/
And have to wear skimask 24/7 to hide from the groupies/
But fuck streetrap, I'm a star now/
And just rap to pass the time when I don't drive my Murcielago/

BTW, English is not my first language
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Old 04-21-2017, 04:37 PM   #312
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Say I can't be stopped,
But I never even started,
say I'm hot when I drop,
But it's not what my heart's in,
The fact is,
this is practice,
spitting rap is,
what keeps me from drowning,
my feet keep on pounding,
to the beats, the sound is drowning,
the town is frowning,
as I wound up,
Found in,
The ground, up,
Like powder,
Clowning,
Around and,
Hounding,
Me down,
Howling,
From the comedy,
Calling me,
A wanna be,
In all modesty,
Youíre never stopping me,
At the starting line,
I donít think Iíll start in time,
The art of rhyme,
Compositions,
They stop me spitting,
Playing,
The lame things,
Admonitions,
ďDrop the rhythms,
Stop the spitting,
Awful singing,
Youíll end up locked in prison,Ē
Weíll Iíll stop this thing when,
I start decomposition,
Ambitious,
To chicken,
Mood swinging,
Like Ted Wilson,
Or Glen Miller,
Vicious,
Predictions,
Petitions like,
ďEnd this thing,Ē
Request switches,
Like friends ditching,
Renditions,
Of traditions,
Linguistics,
Twisting,
Mathematician,
Of read rhythms,
Phonetician,
Get set in,
A logician,
Cognition,
Auditions,
Stop, listen,

Duuuuuude, this is fire. Awesome!
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Old 04-22-2017, 07:13 AM   #313
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Yes, i Agree it is awsome!
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Old 05-08-2017, 07:49 PM   #314
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It's been a while since i done this shit
But fuckit here goes nothin', ima spit

Yeah life's a bitch and we all know it, we all go through it we all feel it but how bout we all stop crying and start fighting for those who are dying, those who are being murdered everyday and all we care about is the fucken video games we play

Where the heart at ? Where the compassion? I know its hard but it's due time I make a confession.

I have done nothing to help the Palestinians, while the israelis are making them their minians. We watch them as they die one at a time but do we even realise that israel is commiting a crime? I stand here in sorrow, for my fellow brothers and sisters who will not see tomorrow.

Fuck what they showing you, that shit's just out there to fool you, they make it seem as though Islam is a religion of terrorism. What I'm saying is the cold hard truth, ain't no need for a euphemism.

We wonder why they become suicide bombers? But what else do they have against the millions of dollars? Thats right. The Americans, they are the cause of all this shenanigans, they are the one's who run the media, they are also the ones who caused the war in Syria. Donald Trump? He ain't nothin' but a chump, hating on muslims, cause they the only ones who dis him?

So here i say proudly, Fuck you America, Fuck you Israel, and fuck you if you think I suffer from insanity, cause whether you follow Islam, Judaism or Christianity, this matter ain't about religion, it's about humanity.
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Old 06-21-2017, 06:32 PM   #315
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couple bars yanno

I’ll shoot you I'll shoot him like whos next
All i'm tryna really do is collect your debt
Wanna have this strap pressed on your neck
Dont yap youll be dead on floor in a sec

Bondy reppin the south uk yannooooo

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Old 06-23-2017, 01:36 PM   #316
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Old 08-25-2017, 02:43 PM   #317
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diss track

hey I know i'm new here but I need help with writing a diss track about someone
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Old 09-05-2017, 07:33 PM   #318
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hey I know i'm new here but I need help with writing a diss track about someone
Just threaten to kill the guy and harm his loved ones.

Seriously, I don't get the "diss track" thing. If you don't like someone and feel emotional enough about it to write a song, don't let that person hear the song because it makes you look weak. I have written dozens of songs in my life and only one was about someone I didn't like. I disguised the lyrics so if by chance this person or anyone who knew him ever heard the song, they'd never know it was about him.

If you actually want to hurt the person, go find him and punch him in the face like a man.
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Old 09-05-2017, 07:41 PM   #319
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So it looks like people just post their dumb rap lyrics here. The only rap I ever wrote was about how much I love eating beans. I'm not kidding, I wrote it. It was fantastic. Made up a bunch of ghetto slang that my hood friends thought was from the even deeper hood. Those lyrics are too good to post here, I've gotta register them with ASCAP first anyway.
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Old 09-07-2017, 01:02 PM   #320
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I'll go one better. Here's a 5 song ep: https://soundcloud.com/blake-turner-29
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Old 10-06-2017, 03:28 PM   #321
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from da hood

if you ain't from my hood don't talk yo shit
if you act like a bitch you gon get hit
stare like you hard you end up in dirt
let my homies take yo bitch and rip off her skirt

got lots of fools fakin that life
actin all tough cuz they carry a knife
but we don't play lil homie, so you better stay cool
and if you don't, we gon take ya to school

chorus:

been gone twenty years
ain't go no fears
everythang good
feelin the pull of the hood

my life been on rotation
ghetto ain't a location
it's a state of mind
now i'm back and it's time



Been gone so long and this shit lookin new
why you actin like a thug? bitch what you gon do?
yeah I know I sound crass
like I ain't got no class
but I'm just trying to put it so you can understand it
so you don't fuck up and make me reprimand shit

chorus
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Old 10-06-2017, 03:40 PM   #322
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ski trip

yo i'm feenin
to go skiin
look in my magic 8 ball
and stare at the wall
geeked out, drunk as hell
gotta get to taco bell
weak bitches can't hang
gotta just do my thang
my head is spinnin
so i smoke my dro
always be winnin
ya'll niggas know
we be cruisin for a deal
gotta make a mil
christmas come early
everythang blurry
spaced out and entered the zone
forgot what the hell saying
here's a shout out to bone
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Old 10-12-2017, 09:40 AM   #323
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Question Find me a beat for this

Iím from Wisconsin, so I know how to drink
I got three girls, so I never ever need to think

Steal, Steal, but Iíd never murder
Never snitch, Bobby Shmurda

Hate the rappers thinking they know how to crack

But they got to know to crank the action back

All my shoes are retro throwbacks

Better break fast when Iím in the tan Cadillac

Mock me and my goons will pull up in a gray Pontiac

I got shooters from Milwaukee alll the way to Fond du Lac

These hoes fake call Ďem instant mac

I see you in the red dot and you gonna die of a heart attack

Post you up like Iím fu#king Shaq

Point blank, if you even try to stab me in my fu#king back
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