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04-05-2012, 06:48 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Greenville, SC, United States
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Song Lyrics....need more verses
Secrets make it easier
Sometimes they shouldnt know Lies are always wrong But can be used for good And u dont have to like it but you dont have to know When nobody knows the trutg your lies can become you After awhile u might seem changed But some things stay the same And u dont have to like it But you dont have to know |
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04-08-2012, 03:12 AM
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The Zoltan
Join Date: Mar 2012
Location: Niigata City, Japan
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Sounds pretty dramatic and good. You could always make it a short song if you have no more ideas for lyrics.
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04-23-2012, 02:40 AM
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Join Date: Apr 2012
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...so dramatic and lonely song: maybe you can give it a title of “White Lies”.
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04-28-2012, 12:23 PM
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Registered User
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Greenville, SC, United States
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Yeah i guess i could just leave it at this then do an instrumental part and end with the repeater parts as a chorus then slow it down and end it.
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05-04-2012, 08:19 PM
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Too Mainstream
Join Date: Apr 2012
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The refrain of "And you don't have to like it / But you don't have to know" is powerful. However, the actual verses sound too straightforward to me; try giving examples of how you feel when you lie, or how you lie, or to whom -- in short, you should add something that gives more depth and offers more of an explanation.
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