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Join Date: Jan 2009
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Please delete this empty album page:
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चत्वारि आर्यसत्यानि
Join Date: Feb 2012
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I'm sorry to bother you guys with this, but in my latest review i have this sentence;
"The music of this album is like the flowering of a cosmic seed that is planted into our being to unionize the mind, body, and soul. It induces a meditative state that directs us into absolute tranquility" I meant to write "blossoming a meditative state that directs us into absolute tranquility" could you fix that please? thank you. http://www.sputnikmusic.com/review/49408/Brooklyn-Raga-Association-Brooklyn-Raga-Association/#lastpost |
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Sputnik ModAdmin
Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: Sarnia, ON
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I don't think that new sentence makes sense (maybe because it's excessive in its continued metaphor?), but to each his own. If I understand your post correctly:
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चत्वारि आर्यसत्यानि
Join Date: Feb 2012
Posts: 190
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I know this isnt the place for this, but do you think it was better before? It reads okay to me but you're the staff reviewer. How would you have it?
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Digging: The Pyramids - Lalibela |
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IS THAT THE OCEAN?!
Sputnik ModAdmin
Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: Sarnia, ON
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I just think you need to make it sound more active. If you read it aloud, it sounds like a sine wave.
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चत्वारि आर्यसत्यानि
Join Date: Feb 2012
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Actually you're right, it sounds weird. how about this:
"Listening to the music of this album is like the flowering of a cosmic seed that has been planted in our mind, one that blossoms into a meditative state and induces absolute tranquility." - I think that's better. Could I trouble you to turn it into this line instead? I'm sorry to bother you with this, Jom. |
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IS THAT THE OCEAN?!
Sputnik ModAdmin
Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: Sarnia, ON
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I still think it could be sped up a bit. Do you really need to say "the music of this album"? Can't you say "Listening to this album's music" or "Listening to this record"? Too many 'of's is my point, I guess. But I can put what you have there.
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चत्वारि आर्यसत्यानि
Join Date: Feb 2012
Posts: 190
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i'll take your advice actually,
"Listening to this album's music is like the flowering of a cosmic seed that has been planted in our mind, one that blossoms into a meditative state and induces absolute tranquility." - That sounds better. if you could add this please, Jom, thanks. sorry for bothering you with this. |
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Digging: The Pyramids - Lalibela |
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Tommy want wingy
Join Date: Jun 2010
Location: Santa Clarita CA
Posts: 425
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Not a real list, delete plz
http://www.sputnikmusic.com/list.php?mode=1&listid=99560#comments |
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Digging: The World is a Beautiful Place And... - Whenever, If Ever |
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BY THE NINE!
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 1,311
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idk if reporting comments still exists but these little cocks in the chiodos news thread man ugh breakin news posts n shit pissin me off like none other
http://sputnikmusic.com/news.php?newsid=21806 |
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Alone Together
Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 102
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http://www.sputnikmusic.com/review/49412/Rest-Rest/
This review is attrociously bad, and is written solely to piss off the sputnik user whose band it is a review of. Additionally, every thread about this band is filled with either alt accounts or useless comments by accounts created yesterday/today claiming 'local powerviolence fan here'. EDIT: ughh this one too: http://www.sputnikmusic.com/review/49418/Rest-Rest/ Last edited by Essence; 04-27-2012 at 12:39 AM. |
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Staff Reviewer
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Poland
Posts: 209
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http://www.sputnikmusic.com/bands/Author-%26-Punisher/32309/
http://www.sputnikmusic.com/bands/Author-%26amp%3B-Punisher/35654/ ^Merge please keeping the first url intact. |
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El Presidente
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Timisoara, Romania
Posts: 36
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Hey there! Can you help with my review for Saint Vitus ? It needs some editing http://www.sputnikmusic.com/review/49417/Saint-Vitus-Lillie%3A-F-65/
I need to correct some of the sentences: In the summary it should be - "one of the finest doom metal bands ever". In the first paragraph, the first sentence it should be - "Saint Vitus had successfully returned in 2003" it sounds better than "have" In the second paragraph it should be - "The Bleeding Ground finds Weinrich singing about...." again, it sounds better IMO The last things, in the third paragraph, in the middle, it should be something like "All the agony culminates in the last 11 minutes, made up by Dependence and Withdrawal which make for an ugly end to the album....." and also a couple of rows after "Weinrich impassionately delivers the final lyrics". I know there are many small mistakes but I rushed to finish it, sorry... Thanks! |
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False metal fanatic
Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: Belgium
Posts: 402
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http://www.sputnikmusic.com/uservote.php?memberid=437364
tr http://www.sputnikmusic.com/profile.php?name=nngannshem spam (example at the bottom of this page: http://www.sputnikmusic.com/album.php?reviewid=11767&page=11#lastpost) |
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The Engineer
Join Date: Jan 2009
Posts: 358
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Please merge:
http://www.sputnikmusic.com/album/98658/Six-Feet-Under-Undead/ http://www.sputnikmusic.com/album/98663/Six-Feet-Under-Undead/ |
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Registered User
Join Date: Apr 2012
Posts: 11
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http://www.sputnikmusic.com/soundoff.php?albumid=100015
Named the Album wrong (Should Be "The Paramour Session (Deluxe Edition)"). For some reason, it won't let me change it. Thanks if/when you fix it. |
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Hedonistic Jaguar
Sputnik Mod
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Wellington, New Zealand
Posts: 1,959
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According to the tracklist that only has 1 extra track on it, why are you even bothering adding it to the db?
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Digging: Calibre - Spill |
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Reviewer of meh
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia
Posts: 430
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http://www.sputnikmusic.com/soundoff.php?albumid=100037
Kindly change the release date to 24th April 2012 - I screwed up when making the album entry. Sorry! |
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Digging: Daft Punk - Random Access Memories |
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IS THAT THE OCEAN?!
Sputnik ModAdmin
Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: Sarnia, ON
Posts: 29,204
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Looks like everything's taken care of. Hooray!
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El Presidente
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Timisoara, Romania
Posts: 36
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Thanks Jom!
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