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04-11-2012, 10:21 PM
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04-11-2012, 10:22 PM
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04-11-2012, 10:23 PM
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04-11-2012, 10:34 PM
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terrible use of commas misuse of a few words |
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04-11-2012, 10:37 PM
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was thinking of turning this in to school tomorrow for a grade |
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04-11-2012, 10:51 PM
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rang
weathered perhaps not strictly wrongly but definitely poorly |
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04-11-2012, 10:54 PM
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04-11-2012, 10:55 PM
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lol haz
and yeah i didn't use weathered poorly only rang |
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04-11-2012, 10:57 PM
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no you used weathered poorly
weathered implies degradation through age and use, that's the fucking word you said that these cigarettes that she was just given yesterday from her brother are weathered that's a fucking poor use of the word i know what you're trying to say and you're saying it poorly |
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04-11-2012, 10:59 PM
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it's for english 2 im not trying to win a pullitzer
you couldnt even handle my more scholarly works that aren't about young girls smoking cigarettes |
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04-11-2012, 11:00 PM
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i dont care what it's for
when i'm right i'm right and, further, when i'm, i'm right |
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04-11-2012, 11:02 PM
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still gonna get an A cuz the teacher thinks im linguistically superior to the otther students
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04-11-2012, 11:04 PM
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my english teacher says I write beautifully my gramma sucks though comes back with all kinds of red pen marks around it
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04-11-2012, 11:05 PM
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ive got this one superbly well written essay about a girl smoking a cigarette in her backyard
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04-11-2012, 11:07 PM
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I wrote an opinion piece to the editor as a black woman talking about slavery
I have a 1000 word short story to write but i've gone well over it has something to do with a guy waking up on an island in the clouds idk where i'm taking it |
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04-11-2012, 11:10 PM
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i should turn in one of my pre-written "bunch of weird shit happens in Eqypt" stories for the grade lawl
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04-11-2012, 11:13 PM
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04-11-2012, 11:14 PM
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lol
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04-11-2012, 11:17 PM
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 sometimes i get mad about not fitting into society then i remember fuck it i'm not missing much |
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04-11-2012, 11:39 PM
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sup guys
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