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Old 03-25-2012, 02:26 AM   #1
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The Eunuch

Quietly, sitting alone in company
Sharing common ground with the tilting table
and understanding glances with the frayed, ruined carpet.
This beer is warm, this room is cold
They don't negate each other.
Escape, escape, it takes forever.
Up and down and waiting.

Sit in the shade of the sun
All the cold hiding deep in my bones
Begins to shiver out.
Expel a breath of tiny ice crystals
They melt in the air
And I drool on myself.

I wish I wish I wish
"That's three you selfish prick,
Just take your lot, take what you've got
Don't waste away hoping for what you threw away"

But the snake in the snake is holding me to ransom
As he slides his way inside, I feel everything.
Every inch of tract he gains, I hide a littler deeper
Beneath the covers.
And when he leaves, quickly please,
I am left to clean the stinking mess
Then hopefully forgot.

I am broken, honey.
It's not your fault I don't respond,
I'm simply broken.
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Old 03-25-2012, 03:07 AM   #2
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that's pretty damn emotive
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Old 03-25-2012, 04:02 AM   #3
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thank you. It will probably get added to in the future since it doesn't feel complete but that'll have to wait until I'm sufficiently inspired and in the right mood.
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Old 03-28-2012, 02:31 PM   #4
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christ

things arent improving since the accident i guess

except your writing
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Old 03-29-2012, 03:03 PM   #5
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Yeah, not to say your previous work isn't excellent (as it is in my opinion), but this is one of the best things I've seen you write. It really instilled a lot of feeling in me reading it.
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Old 03-29-2012, 10:13 PM   #6
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Aww shucks, thanks guys.

But yeah, it's gonna take years before I fully accept this. To be 19 and suddenly be incapable of sex is kinda brutal.
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pardon the flippant curiosity:

what happened?
 
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Jumped off a fifth story balcony, shattering my legs and worse, breaking my back. Turns out not being able to walk is more a mild nuisance compared to some of the other side effects of being paraplegic.
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