New classical/techno project!!

syco722 · 11-03-2009, 08:25 PM

Tell me what you guys think, feedback on any or all of the song would be muchhhh appreciated.

http://www.myspace.com/translucenceistheshizzbro

fishbulb · 11-03-2009, 11:24 PM

I listened to Grandeur and i couldn't help myself sing Green Day's "Boulevard of Broken Dreams" along with it ("I walk the lonely road..."). Same chord progression maybe? This is not a bad thing, by the way.

The change in Grandeur around 2:00 was a bit sudden, i wasn't expecting it and sounded awkward; was this intentional? I did like the effect at 6:00 with the cymbals moving back and forth, though.

Oceans: Reminded me of Muse at first. The bassline in the middle was really rad.

I listened to and enjoyed them all although i'm not usually a fan of electronic music.

foxwood · 11-04-2009, 01:16 PM

It would be awesome if you can do the same to Foxwoods current "jingle." Foxwood is holding a contest and where you create a unique version of the Foxwoods' jingle. Upload your version of “The Wonder of It All™” below and tell your fans to vote for you here. Ten finalists will compete live on Saturday, February 27, 2010, in the Fox Theater at Foxwoods.

The grand prize, worth $25,000, includes a shopping spree for new equipment, time in the recording studio, a promotional advertising package and your winning song featured in Foxwoods' commercials.

Check out www.bethewonder.com for more information. Syco722, you should definitely consider it!

syco722 · 11-04-2009, 03:32 PM

haha thanks fishbulb, Im not a huge green day fan, so if that chord progression was the same, it definitely wasn't intentional

Thanks for the feedback though man!

syco722 · 11-09-2009, 11:23 PM

Thanks again for more feedback fishbulb! Yes, technically that part in grandeur was intentional because it was supposed to shift the song from the intro to the electronic part, but I completely see what you mean with the transition being awkward: That's my major flaw when it comes to writing music. I never can get those transitions down, haha. Also, EVERYONE says that oceans sounds like muse; literally every single person I've shown that song has said the same thing, hahaha, but I take that as a compliment. Although, some people say its essentially a rip-off of the song bliss, but to be honest, I've barely even heard that song before, much less payed a great deal of attention to it.

Im glad you enjoyed my music though man! Please check back every so often, as Im working on more stuff!

fishbulb · 11-09-2009, 11:44 PM

No problem!

Be sure to post more stuff here when you finish it.

11-03-2009, 08:25 PM	#1
syco722 Registered User Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: NC Posts: 50	New classical/techno project!! Tell me what you guys think, feedback on any or all of the song would be muchhhh appreciated. http://www.myspace.com/translucenceistheshizzbro
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11-03-2009, 11:24 PM	#2
fishbulb Beck - Sea Change Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 9,524	I listened to Grandeur and i couldn't help myself sing Green Day's "Boulevard of Broken Dreams" along with it ("I walk the lonely road..."). Same chord progression maybe? This is not a bad thing, by the way. The change in Grandeur around 2:00 was a bit sudden, i wasn't expecting it and sounded awkward; was this intentional? I did like the effect at 6:00 with the cymbals moving back and forth, though. Oceans: Reminded me of Muse at first. The bassline in the middle was really rad. I listened to and enjoyed them all although i'm not usually a fan of electronic music. Last edited by fishbulb; 11-04-2009 at 07:32 PM.

11-04-2009, 03:32 PM	#4
syco722 Registered User Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: NC Posts: 50	haha thanks fishbulb, Im not a huge green day fan, so if that chord progression was the same, it definitely wasn't intentional Thanks for the feedback though man!
	Digging: Between The Buried And Me - The Great Misdirect

11-09-2009, 11:23 PM	#5
syco722 Registered User Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: NC Posts: 50	Thanks again for more feedback fishbulb! Yes, technically that part in grandeur was intentional because it was supposed to shift the song from the intro to the electronic part, but I completely see what you mean with the transition being awkward: That's my major flaw when it comes to writing music. I never can get those transitions down, haha. Also, EVERYONE says that oceans sounds like muse; literally every single person I've shown that song has said the same thing, hahaha, but I take that as a compliment. Although, some people say its essentially a rip-off of the song bliss, but to be honest, I've barely even heard that song before, much less payed a great deal of attention to it. Im glad you enjoyed my music though man! Please check back every so often, as Im working on more stuff!
	Digging: Between The Buried And Me - The Great Misdirect

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11-04-2009, 01:16 PM	#3
foxwood Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 2	It would be awesome if you can do the same to Foxwoods current "jingle." Foxwood is holding a contest and where you create a unique version of the Foxwoods' jingle. Upload your version of “The Wonder of It All™” below and tell your fans to vote for you here. Ten finalists will compete live on Saturday, February 27, 2010, in the Fox Theater at Foxwoods. The grand prize, worth $25,000, includes a shopping spree for new equipment, time in the recording studio, a promotional advertising package and your winning song featured in Foxwoods' commercials. Check out www.bethewonder.com for more information. Syco722, you should definitely consider it!

11-09-2009, 11:44 PM	#6
fishbulb Beck - Sea Change Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 9,524	No problem! Be sure to post more stuff here when you finish it.