I need feedback please, if you'd be so kind
the album is already out but we're starting to record again as soon as we've rehearsed the new songs ... so any review of the mix, sound, song, lyrics or whatever comes to mind would be greatly aprecciated
http://soundcloud.com/danarbed/understanding-the-freedom-1
Understanding the Freedom
Understanding now how it is
I can and I will do whatever I please
Learning so much in a short amount of time
Going away these feelings that suffocate
Can't you see? Or more like “Can't you hear?”
I'm wide awake, though I may
not be here but I am someplace else,
Where you'll probably never see
Happiness tires me
I'm not afraid, but I am drained
I know my soul is deflated
I'll get some music and recharge it.
I am free to stay happy
Stay living, keep dying.
I could do anything
I'm free to do anything
Don't want what I need
Don't need what I want
I can see myself bleed
From poor decisions and circumstance
I'm so glad, I'm not sad, it isn't any fun
Goodbye stress I'll miss you less, than night misses the sun.
Learning to use and falling in love with freedom
I'm afraid when I open my eyes all this will be gone
It's all so easy now
'Cause I know exactly how...
Know what to say
Finding my way
There's only today
No fucking yesterday!