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Thasis · 01-07-2007, 02:57 PM

DeadReligion, you obviously aren't familair with Death Metal, Pornogrind, Goregrind, etc. My lyrics are tame in comparison to many of the bands that produce such a lyrics.

Now Surf, thank you for some critisism. That's what I was looking for. I'm not realy into changing the topic of the song, but I can see what you were going for when you said the nouns and verbs were boring. Next song I write I'll try to be more descriptive and use a bit less-simpleton words.

01-07-2007, 02:57 PM	#33
Thasis Leviathan Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Ninth Lair of Hell Posts: 285	DeadReligion, you obviously aren't familair with Death Metal, Pornogrind, Goregrind, etc. My lyrics are tame in comparison to many of the bands that produce such a lyrics. Now Surf, thank you for some critisism. That's what I was looking for. I'm not realy into changing the topic of the song, but I can see what you were going for when you said the nouns and verbs were boring. Next song I write I'll try to be more descriptive and use a bit less-simpleton words.