Your track
Pink Hair, Yellow Teeth, Jaundice, pretty good. I like the unusual sort of tremolo effect to the main loop, might sound a little thin in the mix at the beginning but you have cool parts like at 1:02 and it sounds pretty tight with the basic beat you bring into it. I love the section around 1:50 or so, reminds me of old school hardcore electronic music.
It's pretty hard to make something out of cheap sounding chiptune VST's but you did a pretty good job.