Its not so much that its sick, its just attentioon seeking
LOOK HOW DISGUSTING I CAN BE ZOMG
just makes it boring. Its not even dark, its just so over the top that it gets ridiculous. Not really much good I'm afraid.
And on top of that, the descriptions were bland, there was a lack of finesse to the writing and you seemed content to match boring nouns with boring verbs.
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