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Old 10-04-2012, 01:14 PM   #16
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"puffy red eyes brow furrowed blindly whimpering like a child jaw shaking voice unsteadily falling its way down into cracked and broken syllables punctuated by sobs"

i really like this line. very stirring imagery
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