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A_Perfect_Sonnet · 07-02-2005, 10:06 PM

A majority of these were awful, so it's going to be hard picking who's last.

DFelon204409 4 - You had the best use of the word by far, but the lack of depth along a feeling that you sort of just wrote it for the challenge held you back from first place.

bowl of oranges 8 - Your writing lacks passion. It feels like they turned Conor Oberst's retarded new lyrical style into a random lyric generator, and you are the beta tester. But because you can somewhat construct a song, you are the very best of the worst.

ITRIEDVOODOOONCE 2 - A great piece, but I just think the subject matter was a little lackluster to hold up to Subtle's.

Disco Dragon 13 - Ew, you threw everything I hate about songwriting in and tried to look good doing it.

Necroses-bass 14 - Holy crap that was bad.

RunAmokRampant 6 - I liked your vocab, and that last line was great, but the piece just falls short when you stack it up against the top 5.

bisnotch 5 - A decent piece, no complaints, it was just a bit anti-climatic.

Corupt2057 7 - Your subject matter seems a little dull, and there wasn't anything standout in there either. Not good, not bad.

JaveryAM 12 - You are getting better, me thinks.

addicted_tochaos 3 - Enjoyable, with some good one/two liners in thrown in, but overall it just lacked the togetherness to shoot it up to first.

puredemocracy 16 - Last place, you know you did worse than I can describe, because the entries this challenge were, for the most part, God awful.

machinegunfunk 9 - Wow, it's the same as everyone else's political song; awful. Jason Zane must be teaching the lyric writing classes over at the community college now adays. Your word usage keeps you in the middle of the pack.

Dancin' Man 10 - Religion grates on my nerves. A valliant effort though.

zer0gauge 11 - Your chorus and somewhat clever lines kept you out of last place.

Crimsonpunk 15 - Song about vampires lost all meaning when Atreyu released The Curse, sorry.

SubtleDagger 1 - I liked the flow and vocab you used in this, and aside from those last few lines, it was a great piece, with a well placed use of the challenge word.

07-02-2005, 10:06 PM	#5
A_Perfect_Sonnet Greyskull Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Winchester, VA Posts: 3,774	A majority of these were awful, so it's going to be hard picking who's last. DFelon204409 4 - You had the best use of the word by far, but the lack of depth along a feeling that you sort of just wrote it for the challenge held you back from first place. bowl of oranges 8 - Your writing lacks passion. It feels like they turned Conor Oberst's retarded new lyrical style into a random lyric generator, and you are the beta tester. But because you can somewhat construct a song, you are the very best of the worst. ITRIEDVOODOOONCE 2 - A great piece, but I just think the subject matter was a little lackluster to hold up to Subtle's. Disco Dragon 13 - Ew, you threw everything I hate about songwriting in and tried to look good doing it. Necroses-bass 14 - Holy crap that was bad. RunAmokRampant 6 - I liked your vocab, and that last line was great, but the piece just falls short when you stack it up against the top 5. bisnotch 5 - A decent piece, no complaints, it was just a bit anti-climatic. Corupt2057 7 - Your subject matter seems a little dull, and there wasn't anything standout in there either. Not good, not bad. JaveryAM 12 - You are getting better, me thinks. addicted_tochaos 3 - Enjoyable, with some good one/two liners in thrown in, but overall it just lacked the togetherness to shoot it up to first. puredemocracy 16 - Last place, you know you did worse than I can describe, because the entries this challenge were, for the most part, God awful. machinegunfunk 9 - Wow, it's the same as everyone else's political song; awful. Jason Zane must be teaching the lyric writing classes over at the community college now adays. Your word usage keeps you in the middle of the pack. Dancin' Man 10 - Religion grates on my nerves. A valliant effort though. zer0gauge 11 - Your chorus and somewhat clever lines kept you out of last place. Crimsonpunk 15 - Song about vampires lost all meaning when Atreyu released The Curse, sorry. SubtleDagger 1 - I liked the flow and vocab you used in this, and aside from those last few lines, it was a great piece, with a well placed use of the challenge word. Last edited by A_Perfect_Sonnet; 07-07-2005 at 08:19 PM.