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Old 05-03-2005, 06:27 PM   #7
i am the robots
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Originally Posted by bowl of oranges
Perhaps i shouldn't have enetered a challenge with one of my first peices. Bound to get killed by everyone else. But i would like to see what people think of my work as i'm quite proud of it.
Yours is pretty good, though the rhyme scheme is a bit wierd.