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i laughed out loud at the 10/10 line.
yeah ill admit that i didnt develop the song like i should have, i actually forgot to edit it altogether, so what you all saw was the first draft. i wanted to take my line about the river of faces flowing into the sea, while they wash their dreams off with soap made of ease, and go somewhere with it. what i was trying to do was make the traveller someone who risks everything to follow their dreams, and "the river of faces" just everyone who doesnt, and takes the easy way out by doing the norm "flows into a sea" "washes their dreams off with soap made of ease" bla blah i didnt present it well enough or develop it like i should. ill be back though you bastards, OH YES, i will be back. mweheehhee
Last edited by SeasonOfTheMad; 04-29-2005 at 06:21 PM.
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