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ATC · 04-29-2005, 02:37 PM

Corupt - Despite all the grief over your word, I like the way you used it. I can definitely see the chorus working well within a song, even if I'm not a fan of all the things in brackets. Its a soundtrack song eh? It works well as that. Though seriously, lose the ....s . Kinda hurts the eyes. 3

Hankie - You made me laugh with the I must, I must part. The song itself isnt
very good. Since you said its a joke, then I guess I should treat it as such. 9

Disco D - I'm alternately liking and hating this. It's decent but I dunno, you
You have nice lines but they seem to go nowhere. After the first two lines, I expected something else altogether. Eh, still cool. 6

R.A.R - I dunno. It feels inconsistent. The middle section kinda ruins it for me.
Maybe I should read this again, as advised. 4

6945- I love this, in a song-that-gets-into-your-head sorta way. Put dawn in the mirror. I just love the chorus part. You need a bridge or an interlude part to complete it, methinks. 5

Rushfan- Sense those commen instincts. Is that a typo for common or conmen? Either ways, its this inspirational sorta song that's on the radio all the time, just in a more out-there way. This wouldnt work that way cos I cant feel any hooks. 7

Season of the Mad - I kinda like it. Its good even if its a first entry.
It feels like a good song, even if the flow is a bit off maybe in a few places.
'The traveller returns..' feels a little strained and forced etc etc. Considering you havent gotten that rigid elsewhere..
PS: Mad Season- River of Deceit. Nice song. Its got the river analogy too. I need to go listen to that CD sometime. 2

Super D- Such insane flow. 8

Jmunk - What are the xxx's supposed to be? Contrary to what you wrote in the replies thread, I dont think you need another stanza to fill this out.
I like, even if the xxx just throws me off. 1

04-29-2005, 02:37 PM	#11
ATC Thru leaves,over bridges Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 6,731	Corupt - Despite all the grief over your word, I like the way you used it. I can definitely see the chorus working well within a song, even if I'm not a fan of all the things in brackets. Its a soundtrack song eh? It works well as that. Though seriously, lose the ....s . Kinda hurts the eyes. 3 Hankie - You made me laugh with the I must, I must part. The song itself isnt very good. Since you said its a joke, then I guess I should treat it as such. 9 Disco D - I'm alternately liking and hating this. It's decent but I dunno, you You have nice lines but they seem to go nowhere. After the first two lines, I expected something else altogether. Eh, still cool. 6 R.A.R - I dunno. It feels inconsistent. The middle section kinda ruins it for me. Maybe I should read this again, as advised. 4 6945- I love this, in a song-that-gets-into-your-head sorta way. Put dawn in the mirror. I just love the chorus part. You need a bridge or an interlude part to complete it, methinks. 5 Rushfan- Sense those commen instincts. Is that a typo for common or conmen? Either ways, its this inspirational sorta song that's on the radio all the time, just in a more out-there way. This wouldnt work that way cos I cant feel any hooks. 7 Season of the Mad - I kinda like it. Its good even if its a first entry. It feels like a good song, even if the flow is a bit off maybe in a few places. 'The traveller returns..' feels a little strained and forced etc etc. Considering you havent gotten that rigid elsewhere.. PS: Mad Season- River of Deceit. Nice song. Its got the river analogy too. I need to go listen to that CD sometime. 2 Super D- Such insane flow. 8 Jmunk - What are the xxx's supposed to be? Contrary to what you wrote in the replies thread, I dont think you need another stanza to fill this out. I like, even if the xxx just throws me off. 1 Last edited by addicted_tochaos; 05-02-2005 at 01:16 PM. Reason: I cant vote in the other post..there's pee in it.