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Corupt2057: First up, ooh a soundtrack. I thought it was a good fit from the film. A couple lines made me wince " from a picture frame" and "You all say you know a doctor...". The sound of them hurt the creative flow for me. Good piece overall though. I liked it

Mr. Hankie: you must, you must, you must practice if you wanna be good like us.

Disco Dragon: Next up...a Sagittarius huh? I think what strikes me about this is the way it gets to the heart of ordinary or "normal" if you will. It's not always poetic, but niether is life for us average Joe's. A good set up for the topic too which the first two didnt capture to well.

RunAmokRampant: Will anyone stick with this long enough to appreciate what you've got here. I say no.

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Rushfan2112: Seemingly seemless. Wistful and simple. A bit light but a good contrast to RunAmok's piece

SeasonOfTheMad: This is good in a pretty sort of way. Seems to lack any kind of edge, bite. ie man seeds sown type of stuff. Chorus works...it all seems to work and daisy's and butterflies are cute. (OMG am I hungover today or what)

JurialMunkey:Yea it’s bleak and it’s anatomy but it’s so well constructed. It has vibrant color but its all shadows, red and black. I hated the Spiderman movies but I get a feeling of one of the villains from one of those flicks. Wildly insane and demented. I was in a video store the other day and saw a release by that horrible slut Paris Hilton: “The Hillz”. So your Z’s, unfortunately reminded me of that bitch. Sorry

addicted tochoas: This alternates between good lines and some that dont work for me. The chorus? with the trees...didnt like. "In my head"...liked. "no one around to see it anyway" nope. The ending liked very much. So kind of an uneven piece in my eyes. It did envoke mood though I will say that.

3rd… Corupt2057
8th… Mr. Hankie
4th… Disco Dragon
1st… RunAmokRampant
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6th Rushfan2112
5th… SeasonOfTheMad
9th… super deluxe
2nd… JurialMunkey
7th… addicted tochoas