Runamokrampant - I would have preferred it if you had not revealed the words,but oh wells. The flaw would be this inability to translate good words and images into something more.. I'd edit out the first and last verses. The in-between is top-notch. 3
Pixiesfanyo- Very nice. 4
BBB- I dunno. I'm a little middle-of-the-road here. It could have been a little more passionate or it could have been a little more beautiful. For now,I'll just say okies. 6
A perfect sonnet- Kinky. Melikes. Indeed, art is love. It's understated,given the theme.
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Corupt2057- You have some really nice lines in there. I think you used just enough force to be memorable. Definitely one of my favorites this time around. 1
apartofmegetsore- No. Just no. Overdone. Not a fan of the slasher genre either. 10
Rushfan2112- I dont get the chorus,and a lot of the song. You're all over the place. And the __-___-___-____ parts arent helping much either. Welcome to the wonderful world of barely-underground\mainstream radio. 9
Thepurplewater- They come in threes,dont they? 8
addicted tochaos- Stupid and contagious
Careyb- What you were looking for's an anaesthetic,not an aesthetic. Reminds me of F.L.O.W (Future leaders of the world). PS: Anaesthetics make you unconscious and arent meant to help you go on. Maybe next time... 7
k.s.e.- Nice work, just lacking the hooks. 5
There was very little separating the last 4 places. I hope you guys like unbalanced dice and GO.