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Old 01-05-2005, 07:51 PM   #15
neiltrett
shaggy dawg
 
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: quebec canada
Posts: 122
hey man...i know ya had a bad thread day,it happens..i found your song regret very disjointed. its hard to figure out exactly what the point is. sometimes listeners need something to give them the overall meaning of the song or a way to relate to the singer. the best songs bring people together,because they can relate to the music as a collective whole,rather than just a group of individuals who are separated by culture,distance,etc...its hard to tell here the source of the emotions being expressed,is all..and the better people can understand your music,the more likely they will listen,and/or buy it...i am not bashing you,man..you show potential,really. i would just try to sort of elaborate a little on why you are experiencing these feelings, and be a little more obvious in your subject matter...it really left me wondering what its about, because it begins focussed on you,but then ends focussed on the outside world. it lacks resolution,ya know? and don't take people seriously who who say stuff like you suck,etc,cause that is just a juvenile outlet for people who really have nothing better to do...good luck,man i look forward to hearing something!
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