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12-14-2004, 08:22 PM

yes very good song i will give it a 8/10. the chorus needs some work, but i think in time, if you work on this a bit it will be really good!

12-14-2004, 08:22 PM	#14
gwerkjkgukerhfvoiusdhgoiewrhgi Guest Posts: n/a	yes very good song i will give it a 8/10. the chorus needs some work, but i think in time, if you work on this a bit it will be really good!