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6945 · 12-08-2004, 10:08 AM

5th…dfelon204409 7/10 Seems like a combination of diary, lyrical metaphors and prayer. I don’t think they really mesh to well. I did like the way the “neighbor’s pool” gave meaning to the piece

4th…RunAmokRampant 7/10 Good opening verse. Hmmm…I don’t follow the sand/ice correlation. I like the 2 line pauses but I do think they lack a little poetic flair. And a resolution at the end….good. I thought the struggle of indecision could’ve been stronger but a good piece nonetheless.

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9th…I Am Vikingcore 5/10 straight forward and simple. Mix with some power riffs and away you go

3rd…addicted_tochaos 7/10 Smoothly written, good pace with changes. But Hmpf…it doesn’t mean anything to me. I need that one little piece to give it meaning like Dfelon’s did. What is vawes?

8th…xKONRADx 6/10 interesting piece, the way you slowly sink to whaaaa? There’s good rhyming in lyrics and there’s forced/cliché. This is an example of good rhyming.

1st…d0ped0g 8/10 Nicely done.

6th…jurialmunkey 7/10 Difficult to score this. Very nicely crafted but ambiguous to a point where I’m at a loss, attaching any personal meaning

7th…Subtledagger 7/10 Dripping with insolence, it has all the dark buzz words casket, maggots,contorted screams. I guess the unapologetic way its presented is both its strength and weakness

10th…Buzzrat 5/10 had some good ideas and a few good lines but pretty rough overall

2nd…Pixiesfanyo 8/10 nice mood but…hey, is that some kinda love song? OH tonight s ardor…I see one nighter. Comatose huh? Gotta be a better word.

12-08-2004, 10:08 AM	#10
6945 Registered User Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 109	5th…dfelon204409 7/10 Seems like a combination of diary, lyrical metaphors and prayer. I don’t think they really mesh to well. I did like the way the “neighbor’s pool” gave meaning to the piece 4th…RunAmokRampant 7/10 Good opening verse. Hmmm…I don’t follow the sand/ice correlation. I like the 2 line pauses but I do think they lack a little poetic flair. And a resolution at the end….good. I thought the struggle of indecision could’ve been stronger but a good piece nonetheless. 6945 9th…I Am Vikingcore 5/10 straight forward and simple. Mix with some power riffs and away you go 3rd…addicted_tochaos 7/10 Smoothly written, good pace with changes. But Hmpf…it doesn’t mean anything to me. I need that one little piece to give it meaning like Dfelon’s did. What is vawes? 8th…xKONRADx 6/10 interesting piece, the way you slowly sink to whaaaa? There’s good rhyming in lyrics and there’s forced/cliché. This is an example of good rhyming. 1st…d0ped0g 8/10 Nicely done. 6th…jurialmunkey 7/10 Difficult to score this. Very nicely crafted but ambiguous to a point where I’m at a loss, attaching any personal meaning 7th…Subtledagger 7/10 Dripping with insolence, it has all the dark buzz words casket, maggots,contorted screams. I guess the unapologetic way its presented is both its strength and weakness 10th…Buzzrat 5/10 had some good ideas and a few good lines but pretty rough overall 2nd…Pixiesfanyo 8/10 nice mood but…hey, is that some kinda love song? OH tonight s ardor…I see one nighter. Comatose huh? Gotta be a better word. Last edited by 6945; 12-10-2004 at 10:09 AM.