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xKONRADx -9-the structure of the piece didn't really do it for me. Makes it kind of drag on.
A_Perfect_Sonnet2-good word choices to create your mood
pixiesfanyo-3-you really make the rhyme scheme and the words and the syntax work for you. good job
Disco Dragon-6
ta'ao-8
Deathapalooza-7-pretty good, could be better. maybe better word choice
TrailOfTragedy-12-just doesnt work. need to polish it up more
Eleventeen-11
SubtleDagger-1-I really like the extended metaphor. good job
Mighty Morphin' Power Ranger-4
Linsey-10-didnt understand why you kept saying wait. kind of redundant
chips88-me
addicted_tochaos-5
Last edited by chips88; 11-07-2004 at 06:19 PM.
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