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xKONRADx · 11-03-2004, 12:42 PM

xKONRADx - 1st yay! no.

A_Perfect_Sonnet - suprizingly good. i like the first part, though when i usually see things like that in songs, it puts me off.

pixiesfanyo - not much, good, but i think the ending wasnt as good as it could be.

Disco Dragon - guillotine? that was so like 2 or 3 challenges ago. anyway, the song was nice. i think that is the right word, nice.

ta'ao - meh, it was good. but i think its too... i dont know how to put it. plus those () parts sucked.

Deathapalooza - meh. yep. meh. not bad, but challenges should be special.

TrailOfTragedy - to be honest i didnt like the repetition, i think this could have been alot better if you reformatted it. hm but i dont know...

Eleventeen - i dont know. i didnt really like it. i suggest spending time in the S&L before your next challenge.

SubtleDagger - midway i was thinking that i wish you would use a different style of how you phrase things. but towards the end it was more appropriate. still damn good.

Mighty Morphin' Power Ranger - some parts were good. others werent (the out-doubt-out). and some didnt make sense to me( the spouting of blood) so its got potential, but needs revision.

Linsey - its good. but like i said to someone else, it should be something special. though i think this ones better than the other one i said that about.

chips88 - the intro has too many i's and it's. meh. i think if you put more time into something it would be better.

addicted_tochaos - i always like your stuff. but this seems... unlike you somehow... i dont like it compared to your other stuff, but its not last place.

xKONRADx - x
A_Perfect_Sonnet -4
pixiesfanyo -3
Disco Dragon -2
ta'ao -7
Deathapalooza -11
TrailOfTragedy -9
Eleventeen -12
SubtleDagger - 1
Mighty Morphin' Power Ranger -6
Linsey - 8
chips88 -10
addicted_tochaos -5

11-03-2004, 12:42 PM	#2
xKONRADx The Chosen Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Fûck Feûdalism Posts: 1,847	xKONRADx - 1st yay! no. A_Perfect_Sonnet - suprizingly good. i like the first part, though when i usually see things like that in songs, it puts me off. pixiesfanyo - not much, good, but i think the ending wasnt as good as it could be. Disco Dragon - guillotine? that was so like 2 or 3 challenges ago. anyway, the song was nice. i think that is the right word, nice. ta'ao - meh, it was good. but i think its too... i dont know how to put it. plus those () parts sucked. Deathapalooza - meh. yep. meh. not bad, but challenges should be special. TrailOfTragedy - to be honest i didnt like the repetition, i think this could have been alot better if you reformatted it. hm but i dont know... Eleventeen - i dont know. i didnt really like it. i suggest spending time in the S&L before your next challenge. SubtleDagger - midway i was thinking that i wish you would use a different style of how you phrase things. but towards the end it was more appropriate. still damn good. Mighty Morphin' Power Ranger - some parts were good. others werent (the out-doubt-out). and some didnt make sense to me( the spouting of blood) so its got potential, but needs revision. Linsey - its good. but like i said to someone else, it should be something special. though i think this ones better than the other one i said that about. chips88 - the intro has too many i's and it's. meh. i think if you put more time into something it would be better. addicted_tochaos - i always like your stuff. but this seems... unlike you somehow... i dont like it compared to your other stuff, but its not last place. xKONRADx - x A_Perfect_Sonnet -4 pixiesfanyo -3 Disco Dragon -2 ta'ao -7 Deathapalooza -11 TrailOfTragedy -9 Eleventeen -12 SubtleDagger - 1 Mighty Morphin' Power Ranger -6 Linsey - 8 chips88 -10 addicted_tochaos -5 Last edited by xKONRADx; 11-10-2004 at 10:42 AM.