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ATC · 10-19-2004, 06:23 AM

GOT WOOD? -W

6945- Very RHCP...sounds like something off Blood,sugar,sex,magic. Gotta love them. Funk is very under-done here.

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pixies - Intriguing. Nice structure. Insectifuge= insect+centrifuge? Nice words, vague theme, generally pretty good. 3

perfectsonnet- A nice closer, the last bit. The first bit would, to me, be unclear without the music. I dont generally listen to much FATA beyond the songs where the girl sings. Autumn monologue, i think. Still good. 6

hotcod - Sound and fury. Not good enough yet. The whole 'girl that lied' theme has run its course, in the music scene as well as everywhere else. Branch out. Reach up and Reach beyond. 11

disco- decidedly average coming from you. ps: nice fetish. 8

zepfan - Cheesy intro. I'd take points off for using a religious theme in a challenge with 'pious' but you're the first yet, so tis alrite, i think. To answer your question in the replies thread, its not vague at all. For a zep fan, this seems punk-ish. Any rate, its average. I'd say make it shorter with a hook. That might be self-defeating in this case, so i'll just shut up. 10

ta'ao - Fuck me, Satan, that's a poem. I could swear i've read that somewhere. My dying bride? Romantic era poetry? Assuming thats an original, its pretty good. You made sex seem like a thesis.

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addicted_tochaos- me...how do i love me? let me count the ways. whoops,a kitten just died.

dman -An interesting piece. I'd love to know how you'll turn this into a song without sounding like FATA or a very hardcore Taking Back Sunday. ps:

How would you have John<3 sara sung?aside from these basic questions, its very fricken good, even if emo. 5

sketchyjoe- Punkrawka!! While i agree with the tirade, I like songs that have layers instead of it all thrown bare. It's hard hitting. Recommend me some songs in that genre. 9

Green day punk- Maybe its your name, but i can definitely see green day here. Reminds me of something off warning. 2

subtledagger- too many pronouns in the first and third person plural. What are you? Karl Marx? You sound like Linkin park with an education or a socially conscious Manowar.
Its alrite. For a god from the machine. 7

Somebody leave a light on, just in case i like the dancing, i remember where i go.

10-19-2004, 06:23 AM	#6
ATC Thru leaves,over bridges Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 6,731	GOT WOOD? -W 6945- Very RHCP...sounds like something off Blood,sugar,sex,magic. Gotta love them. Funk is very under-done here. 1 pixies - Intriguing. Nice structure. Insectifuge= insect+centrifuge? Nice words, vague theme, generally pretty good. 3 perfectsonnet- A nice closer, the last bit. The first bit would, to me, be unclear without the music. I dont generally listen to much FATA beyond the songs where the girl sings. Autumn monologue, i think. Still good. 6 hotcod - Sound and fury. Not good enough yet. The whole 'girl that lied' theme has run its course, in the music scene as well as everywhere else. Branch out. Reach up and Reach beyond. 11 disco- decidedly average coming from you. ps: nice fetish. 8 zepfan - Cheesy intro. I'd take points off for using a religious theme in a challenge with 'pious' but you're the first yet, so tis alrite, i think. To answer your question in the replies thread, its not vague at all. For a zep fan, this seems punk-ish. Any rate, its average. I'd say make it shorter with a hook. That might be self-defeating in this case, so i'll just shut up. 10 ta'ao - Fuck me, Satan, that's a poem. I could swear i've read that somewhere. My dying bride? Romantic era poetry? Assuming thats an original, its pretty good. You made sex seem like a thesis. 4 addicted_tochaos- me...how do i love me? let me count the ways. whoops,a kitten just died. dman -An interesting piece. I'd love to know how you'll turn this into a song without sounding like FATA or a very hardcore Taking Back Sunday. ps: How would you have John<3 sara sung?aside from these basic questions, its very fricken good, even if emo. 5 sketchyjoe- Punkrawka!! While i agree with the tirade, I like songs that have layers instead of it all thrown bare. It's hard hitting. Recommend me some songs in that genre. 9 Green day punk- Maybe its your name, but i can definitely see green day here. Reminds me of something off warning. 2 subtledagger- too many pronouns in the first and third person plural. What are you? Karl Marx? You sound like Linkin park with an education or a socially conscious Manowar. Its alrite. For a god from the machine. 7 Somebody leave a light on, just in case i like the dancing, i remember where i go. Last edited by addicted_tochaos; 10-26-2004 at 10:59 AM.