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6495
Interesting enough. It had some cliche metaphors and some interesting metaphors. Not really a winning piece but I guess it's a decent effort.
6.2/10 - 5
A_Perfect_Sonnet
This reminded me of something by Bright Eyes. I really really really dislike Bright Eyes. They are incredibly annoying in my eyes (ha, pun). Yeah, so not really my thing.
4.3/10 - 9
hotcod32
...I could tell from your avatar this was going to be pretty bad. Sorry but I'm not really into power pop.
3.3/10 - 10
Disco Dragon
You might of gone a little overboard on the langauge, but isn't that something we are all guilty of. This was a nice piece, much better than your recent stuff. I liked the line "Squirm for your spoils".. It was interesting but I think you should've followed it up with a stronger piece.
7.4/10 - 4
zeppelinfan2k3
You lost me on the meaning for this..sorry but I wasn't a big fan.
5.7/10 - 6
ta'ao
Very Jim Morrisonish. I digged it nice work newbie.
7.8/10 - 3
addicted_tochaos
Er...Not your best to say the least.
4.4/10 - 8
DFelon204009
Your writing has been getting alot more poetic as of late, more based on ideas over rhythm, I like it alot. You should win this one.
8.6/10 - 1
sketchyjoe
Reminds me of 25th Hour. See it and You'll see what I mean.
5.0/10 - 7
green day punk
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1.0/10 - 11
SubtleDagger
It's good but it has some overused ideas. Oh well. Nice writing.
7.9/10 - 2