Hmmm, in truth its not really the type of music i normally listen to, sounds too for me, without much action in the song... Still you have a lot of potential, I like both the soft and the heavy guitar riffs, they're pretty cool... i'd prefer it if I could hear a bit more bass, but maybe thats just not your bands style... your drummer needs to hit the things harder (but dont worry, i say that about most drummers).
I think you're pretty good, just work on the song a little, maybe make a better recording, i got more fond of the song the more it went on, but i feel it began to drag out a little at the end.
^^ reading what i've said it sounds pretty critical but dont take it the wrong way, i think you could be pretty good, just work on your stuff a little
