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Originally Posted by thingfromunderthesink
Needs stucture what type of song is it
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id have to say, theres NO structure. but try changing the wording a little, maybe iambic pentameter (i suggest that a lot). or maybe make each verse into a haiku (no fvckin idea how to spell that)
yah dude, i like posted five songs in a day..OMG im so lucky i didnt get banned.