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For the experimantal point of view i like it.
I take a look at my self
do you see it to___?
the man that i need to be
I need to live for you____!
But for you im not alive
Ill Hold it deep inside
Ill keep it under control
and over your head
I like this verse especially the first four lines i think that could be sung wiv like a singer and a backing singer dat would sound good.
Overall i like this song maybe not stickin with a structure can work for some people. 8.5/10
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