[SixStringKing]

This is My second song ive written i dont know what to call it if you have any ideas put it in your crit please



I take a look at my self
do you see it to___?
the man that i need to be
I need to live for you____!
But for you im not alive
Ill Hold it deep inside
Ill keep it under control
and over your head

Ill Make you red___
Ill Shake You down___

Lend Me your eyes
I can see now that im going blind
You talk to angels
Show me the god you need to find
But now_________
Heaven is full____
Im Broken like an angel now
Heaven will fall___
Ill keep you under my wings

Ill look into your broken mirror
Ill lean against your broken walls
Ill take you out when i go down
cause im not going alone
Ill take the world now
Down

{a young boy chanting}
{Ill take you out when i go down} 3x
{cause im not going alone}
{Ill take the world now}

ILL TAKE YOU OUT WHEN I GO DOWN
CAUSE IM NOT GOING ALONE
ILL TAKE THIS WORLD NOW

This is beyond you now
its better than me and colder than you___
It will all come down.
Before im down and out ill shake you down
ill make you bleed

I take a look at my self
do you see it to___?
the man that i need to be
I need to live for you____!
But for you im so alive
Ill Let loose deep inside
Ill Lose all control
And take this world down




sorry for posting more than one song in a day..it wont happen again....

but when the boy chants that will be behind some slick guitar riffs and on the fourth time the vocals will come back with him