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Ashes In Your Mouth · 05-28-2004, 11:17 AM

I like " Shattered Life" as a title

I like your verses but I think the chorus needs to be changed. It just doesn't grab/move me the way the verses did.

05-28-2004, 11:17 AM	#5
Ashes In Your Mouth Registered User Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 54	I like " Shattered Life" as a title I like your verses but I think the chorus needs to be changed. It just doesn't grab/move me the way the verses did.