[NoMoreHate]

Hey, love the imagery of the speaker's "shattered life", especially about being cut by a shard and the bleeding conscience. Very original. best part for me is:

"who needs enemies when some live inside me", nice idea.

generally good structure and rhyme, couple of rhythm issues tho IMO, for example:

"walking through the pieces of my shattered life
i find a shard of the things i did in spite"
- As i said i like the imagery, but you might want to add another syllable or two in the second line. depends on how you sing it tho i guess.

Also slight repetition in the chorus with

"why do i do this to my health", and then "why do i do this to myself"
I would suggest possibly changing the second part to something like: "what makes me do this to myself".

Otherwise, good job i like the theme.