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hey dude
can you crit my song its not finished yet, but what do you think so far.
she likes the sound of rain on the tin roof.
she likes it when it falls down, then she cries because of me and i know its wrong.
she likes to tell me she doesnt care
she likes to think im unaware, and then she smiles because of me and know shes gone.
chorus
cos lately i see im notpretending to be but i, i keep on smilling
and lately i see its notyou but its me, but my world keeps on falling
and baby believe im the one who can see all your mourning.
anybody who knows what theyre talking bout can crit my song.
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