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new song i wrote
You're silouette is drawn in my mind.
It darkens with every note I find.
Notes filled with hatred, love, despair.
They conceal me with every swear.
CHORUS:
My bones weaken with every hit I take.
With every move, my muscles ache.
The sunlight is bleeding through the blinds
And your silouette is drawn in my mind.
I hear your soft voice for it's the only reason I know I'm alive.
It's barely above a whisper but still above all the other cries.
It accompanies me on my long trip home.
It chills me to my every bone.
CHORUS:
My bones weaken with every hit I take.
With every move, my muscles ache.
The sunlight is bleeding through the blinds
And your silouette is drawn in my mind.
give me some feedback on this song and ill help you with some of your own.
Last edited by mshort813; 11-05-2004 at 10:55 PM.
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