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please crit my untitled song....none of that "i want to kill myself" stuff
Ok....im new to this site even though ive been browsing it since Christmas..........But anyways, heres a song thats kind of personal with a hidden meaning.....i hope you enjoy it. (its untitled)
Mother Marys right behind me
whispering nonsense of a past long lost
Making all my praisings worthless
Changing everyone around me.
Watching like a stalking tiger
waiting for who the blame rests
tossing me into a world of complication
throwing indecision in after me
Why cant we be together?!
Why am I gone forever?!
Why cant we sleep foreever?
one last time.....forever
(let me see you one more time
please,god, let her call me mine)
Paranoia sits upon my shoulders
breathing down my neck to die
Making confusion in my head
Trying to make me pass this time
Why cant we be together?!
Why am I gone forever?!
Why can’t we sleep together?
One last time…. forever…
thats it! please crit!
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