the line is it to lat
to see whats written drawn or
how to ask to be
its kinda meaning, its hard to find the strenght left beacuse is fading, you cant quite make it out, but if you look close and hard enough its in there somewhere
how to ask to be, is kind of a pre chorus build up, but how to ask the girl out pretty much. Later on the line how to ask to be denied, kinda sums up how he's feeling, the chorus is fairly choppy but its meant to be that way, the "god save me from the world again...." is sung slower with different rythm, the come now turn your back and leave me bit is sung by two singers kinda screaming one word at a time but very fast, we added that bit after i wrote the song just coz it sounds cool so people dont get bored, the last time its sung its built up into a big sceamy type thing, ya have to listen to it, when we record we shall do that song and it will be on my bands website
www.therevelationrock.cjb.net
thanks for critting me guys my bands from the uk