[Wadey]

Like Paper In Rain

i'm holding on
for you to look the other way
and just forget
these things i feel today
How to ask to be

(chorus)
coming out
maybe now
i'll let it take
one more shot
one more chance
to get it right
nothings coming
nothings coming
god save me from,
the world again
god save my soul,
its cold again

my strenght inside
fades Like paper will in rain
is it to late, to see whats written drawn or
how to ask to be

coming out .... (chorus bit)

come now turn your back and leave me (x4)

counting questions in my mind,
how to ask to be denied
my courage lost or locked inside,
my courage lost or locked inside (x6 quietly)

chorus bit

come now turn your back and leave me (this bit is kinda shoty, with 2 vocalists alternating words)

Wrote this for my band, tis about loving somebody and having the courage to tell them, the song is all done now, but wondered what people thought about the lyrics

please crit