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I don't like it much. I'd say the biggest problem is that you're just saying how you are most of the time... "I'm this, I'm that", stuff like that. In order to make a better song, you need to branch out from simply saying how you feel and say it in a different (and hopefully more ambiguous) way. A few of the rhymes feel forced, but it does have a bit of promise. 5/10
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