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Fallen_Angel666 · 02-04-2004, 03:31 PM

Very nice man, i really like the ending it's very powerful and a good choice of words in alot of it but i think it would help to go through and do some editing with syllables and such but otherwise, nice piece.

02-04-2004, 03:31 PM	#8
Fallen_Angel666 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 27	Very nice man, i really like the ending it's very powerful and a good choice of words in alot of it but i think it would help to go through and do some editing with syllables and such but otherwise, nice piece.