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Just Like That · 02-04-2004, 02:51 PM

This is pretty good, I agree with the rhyming, but since it flowed with that, it worked. I don't think that this needs a chorus, maybe just a bridge, something different to push it along.

02-04-2004, 02:51 PM	#6
Just Like That She Said Kayak. Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: NJ Posts: 1,156	This is pretty good, I agree with the rhyming, but since it flowed with that, it worked. I don't think that this needs a chorus, maybe just a bridge, something different to push it along.