Hey! nice song man, I liked it. Reminds me of a sort of mixture of Mars Volta, Hundred Reasons, ATDI etc. etc. You all sound tight as a band, so no reason you couldn't do something with this. I suppose my only suggestion would be to perhaps bring something unique to the genre, something that stylistically defines you as a band. You influences are very clear and apparent, and obviously that's not a bad thing. Everyone is influenced by someone! But perhaps in the future, expand on those influences, create an aspect of your music that will make people listen to your songs and say "hey, check it out - that's
Beloved Tragedy!!! 
But other than that, yeah i liked it. Good performances all round, look foward to hearing more.
*thumbs up*