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I Love Fat women · 01-09-2006, 10:38 PM

This be my first entry into these competitions. I hope it follows the rules. If not, please notify me and I'll change whatever there is that is unfit.

Gone Tomorrow

doused once again
absinthe and fire
sugar so dire
your lips moved before
red left through the door

I hate to see you leave like this
I've yet to steal from you a kiss

jet engine rumble
skies of thunder
lost and sunder
your hand waved again
gray tears in the rain

I hate to see you leave like this
I've yet to steal from you a kiss

bitter grapefruit juice
morning of tomorrow
i write in sorrow
pen my passion down
blue ink writes a noun

I hope to see you once again,
until then, goodbye my friend.

01-09-2006, 10:38 PM	#12
I Love Fat women Become Disillusionized Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Nowhere Posts: 2,012	This be my first entry into these competitions. I hope it follows the rules. If not, please notify me and I'll change whatever there is that is unfit. Gone Tomorrow doused once again absinthe and fire sugar so dire your lips moved before red left through the door I hate to see you leave like this I've yet to steal from you a kiss jet engine rumble skies of thunder lost and sunder your hand waved again gray tears in the rain I hate to see you leave like this I've yet to steal from you a kiss bitter grapefruit juice morning of tomorrow i write in sorrow pen my passion down blue ink writes a noun I hope to see you once again, until then, goodbye my friend. Last edited by I Love Fat women; 01-19-2006 at 04:10 AM.