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Old 01-08-2006, 11:18 PM   #5
Jetpack
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Hey This is my first entry into this competition, I'm not sure exactly if this works but I'm assuming that you just have to incorporate the word into your submission? Anyways let me know please if this is appropriate thanks!!!

Question

There’s a hole in my heart.
And it will not let me be.
Dark, the beast’s burden carried
The Black reaches out for me
I’m getting my release
Focused like a flame
And yet its always there
My underlying pain.

A hole in body and in soul
My time it nears at hand
And so I Light my funeral Pyre
My eternal presence damned.
And all that is left of me
My hopes dreams and desires
Smolders like the remaining ashes
Of a winter night’s fire.
The chilling hand douses the embers
My Leo is taken away.
Flowing downwards in streams of dark
Ashes and teardrops tainted with gray
It’s grasp embraces and leads me
On my journey to find,
the final adventure comes in death
and rebirth in unending time.
Slowly it pulls and takes without giving
Snatching my hold from the ground.
And what’s left is a deep sense of longing
And faded memories not found.

A beginning of an ending enveloped in mystery
The everlasting question remaining unanswered
Now it’s my turn to ask and receive
For behind the black curtain is mine to perceive.
The underlying truth.
To the unanswered question
One last glimpse at reality
My existence into regression.

Last edited by Jetpack; 01-08-2006 at 11:23 PM.
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