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xKONRADx · 11-01-2005, 08:12 PM

/dead santa

7-TojesDolan-the fourth line, and the first verse in general are somewhat weak.

5-RunAmokRampant-akwardness mingled with elegance. hmm.

4-MMPR-i like. but the 5/6/8 rhymes need to go.

9-Dancin' Man-I dont really understand how its to be read. also language is somewhat inconsistant.

10-Bowl of Oranges-like the couplet. was somewhat hard to connect with.

3-SubtleDagger-nice, but you usually are a harder hitter.

2-Pixiesfanyo-yummy.

1-ATC-**** you i love this.

12-Silenceevolves-familiar experience. dont like the side effects though.

x-xKonradx-peasant

11-Lowridenn-i guess you make up for all those short ones. with somehting so long its harder to visualize as a complete piece.

8-Scared4Life-If you wanna hit, you gotta end with a bang. as for this, its much harder to do when the title is so good.

6-KeepingtheBlade-like parts. indifferent to parts.

13-CrimsonPunk-the first half isnt so great. but the second half compensates.

11-01-2005, 08:12 PM	#10
xKONRADx The Chosen Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Fûck Feûdalism Posts: 1,847	/dead santa 7-TojesDolan-the fourth line, and the first verse in general are somewhat weak. 5-RunAmokRampant-akwardness mingled with elegance. hmm. 4-MMPR-i like. but the 5/6/8 rhymes need to go. 9-Dancin' Man-I dont really understand how its to be read. also language is somewhat inconsistant. 10-Bowl of Oranges-like the couplet. was somewhat hard to connect with. 3-SubtleDagger-nice, but you usually are a harder hitter. 2-Pixiesfanyo-yummy. 1-ATC-**** you i love this. 12-Silenceevolves-familiar experience. dont like the side effects though. x-xKonradx-peasant 11-Lowridenn-i guess you make up for all those short ones. with somehting so long its harder to visualize as a complete piece. 8-Scared4Life-If you wanna hit, you gotta end with a bang. as for this, its much harder to do when the title is so good. 6-KeepingtheBlade-like parts. indifferent to parts. 13-CrimsonPunk-the first half isnt so great. but the second half compensates. Last edited by xKONRADx; 11-06-2005 at 01:54 PM.