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silenceevolves - 8. I am not sure as to what I think of this.
Dancin’ Man - 2. You, my friend........are very talented.
A Perfect Sonnet -3. I do believe this is beautiful.
Lowridenn - 7 Not so bad, but not my forte. Some of it is just a beautiful portrayal of nostalgia, and some is just blah.
xKONRADx - 5 Great. Aside from the "cha" slang.
RunAmokRampant -4 Very good job.
Broken String- 14 I do not dig.
Disco Dragon -12 This rhyme scheme is sketchy. It kind of destroyed it for me. You shouldn't rhyme, unless you know you can rhyme well.
TojesDoLan- 10 Not the worst, not the best.
Crimsonpunk - 13 This is either a failed attempt at a death metal song, or.........I do not even know.
ATC - 1. This sort of writing is rare. It brings me to a better place, knowing someone can write so well.
ITRIEDVOODOOONCE -11 I like the idea you're getting at, well......the lyrics are a little too mediocre.
StuP - 6 This is not bad at all. I would like to aknowledge, that this has potential for greatness.
LeeRoberts - 9. Again, the rhyming isn't amazing. Other than that, it's a good one.
Benjamin Lee South
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