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xKONRADx · 10-14-2005, 12:21 AM

6-silenceevolves- its reasonable, revise repetition of 'differences'
8-Dancin’ Man- nice idea, 'rubble' line goes unfinnished
2-A Perfect Sonnet- unconventional, monumental? i cant think of changes...
9-Lowridenn- it was written well enough, but... lameish?
0-xKONRADx- FATALITY
7-RunAmokRampant- drawn out
12-Broken String- nice start....
3-Disco Dragon- less style near the end, but i like it alot
10-TojesDoLan- hmm, ok.
13-Crimsonpunk- nice effort?
1-ATC- fucking right
4-ITRIEDVOODOOONCE- short, but nice
11-StuP- meh
14-LeeRoberts- no.
5-Benjamin Lee South- a little sick but well written

10-14-2005, 12:21 AM	#3
xKONRADx The Chosen Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Fûck Feûdalism Posts: 1,847	6-silenceevolves- its reasonable, revise repetition of 'differences' 8-Dancin’ Man- nice idea, 'rubble' line goes unfinnished 2-A Perfect Sonnet- unconventional, monumental? i cant think of changes... 9-Lowridenn- it was written well enough, but... lameish? 0-xKONRADx- FATALITY 7-RunAmokRampant- drawn out 12-Broken String- nice start.... 3-Disco Dragon- less style near the end, but i like it alot 10-TojesDoLan- hmm, ok. 13-Crimsonpunk- nice effort? 1-ATC- fucking right 4-ITRIEDVOODOOONCE- short, but nice 11-StuP- meh 14-LeeRoberts- no. 5-Benjamin Lee South- a little sick but well written Last edited by xKONRADx; 10-18-2005 at 10:55 PM.