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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 03-27-2011, 06:43 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,034
Posted By Banion
Wait, this wasn't intended as lyrics? It...

Wait, this wasn't intended as lyrics? It definitely flows like a song to me. Last two lines stood out the most, I think the best thing about this is how well everything is pieced together.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 03-27-2011, 06:29 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 635
Posted By Banion
"& it's been laundry day, for at least 3 Weeks" ...

"& it's been laundry day, for at least 3 Weeks"
Really liked this.
I agree with jodyWanye, read it like a rap, then listened to the link you posted and loved hearing the way it was meant to be....
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 03-27-2011, 06:19 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 420
Posted By Banion
Agreed, I do this alot to.

Agreed, I do this alot to.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 03-16-2011, 11:21 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 542
Posted By Banion
A Love Like No Other Hate

I hear no voices,
no voices but my own.
Shadowed and duplicated a thousand times 'round.
I'd kill for your "voices" that let you sink and drown.

Sharing custody with this disease.
You know...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 03-14-2011, 06:30 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 504
Posted By Banion
So I really really enjoyed this, I find it hard...

So I really really enjoyed this, I find it hard to find something that catches my attention from first read without having to look, then come back, then appreciate it. This got me from the first...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-01-2011, 07:32 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 827
Posted By Banion
Last two lines held my attention more then the...

Last two lines held my attention more then the rest. They were very well placed.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-01-2011, 07:23 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,035
Posted By Banion
I really enjoyed this. I think I'm the only one...

I really enjoyed this. I think I'm the only one here who liked the longer version of it a bit better. But it's still very good short aswell.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-01-2011, 07:15 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 494
Posted By Banion
Sorry foreverendeared, I most definitely did not...

Sorry foreverendeared, I most definitely did not mean for it to come off as a "i'm posting here but am not going to give feedback to anyone else" thing. It was more that this is my first time ever...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 12-29-2010, 05:30 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 494
Posted By Banion
Yup thats me, ummm well it was undecided... I...

Yup thats me, ummm well it was undecided... I went to bed before Taxi, but my time is an hour ahead of his. =p I think we decided I always win though haha.

Thanks, glad someone liked it atleast a...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 12-28-2010, 06:25 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 494
Posted By Banion
My God You're a Thief

You were here.
Felt you brush against my chest,
hand on my inner thigh.
Felt your words press tightly into my ear,
Felt your God damn breath.
Still prophesied a future containing nothing less...
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