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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-11-2008, 09:49 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,020
Posted By burton.and.gas
i often just down and write, which rarely works....

i often just down and write, which rarely works. However when it does work i usually have either an idea or melody (often plagiarised)in mind, then it tends to come to me slightly more easily.
Forum: Lyrical Challenges 05-08-2008, 03:52 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,971
Posted By burton.and.gas
RunAmokRampant-3 tablespoonful-x/5 Surf-1 ...

RunAmokRampant-3
tablespoonful-x/5
Surf-1
The_Lost_21-4
joshmay-2

sort of hard to crit tbh
Forum: Lyrical Challenges 03-21-2008, 07:55 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,905
Posted By burton.and.gas
On this Globe, disillusion can cause an end ...

On this Globe,
disillusion can cause an end
descent into apathy lying by a doctor's bed
Stars aren't fate,
an action can begin,
ascent into activeness lies deep under our skin

(Chorus)
The...
Forum: Guitar 01-11-2008, 01:58 PM
Replies: 114
Views: 2,622
Posted By burton.and.gas
That's what I did.

That's what I did.
Forum: Guitar 01-11-2008, 01:57 PM
Replies: 114
Views: 2,622
Posted By burton.and.gas
suck at both but keep doing both.

suck at both but keep doing both.
Forum: Lyrical Challenges 12-23-2007, 04:06 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,053
Posted By burton.and.gas
The wry words of your enemy the wry triumphant...

The wry words of your enemy
the wry triumphant psychopath
The unhappy ending
The art of a thriller's direction

Admiration of genius
comes to light
comes to light each time

And victims are...
Forum: Rock & Metal 12-19-2007, 04:03 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 832
Posted By burton.and.gas
imo she's a good singer, but not for a classical...

imo she's a good singer, but not for a classical super-girl! Oh yeah and her music has always been cheesy
Forum: Lyrical Challenges 12-09-2007, 05:55 PM
Replies: 61
Views: 3,210
Posted By burton.and.gas
lol my ppl are being abused, tbh i like our sense...

lol my ppl are being abused, tbh i like our sense of humour, despite not being very patriotic!
Forum: Lyrical Challenges 09-22-2007, 03:24 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 965
Posted By burton.and.gas
i'll write one.

i'll write one.
Forum: Community: Music/Off-Topic 09-09-2007, 06:35 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 520
Posted By burton.and.gas
hehe i saw him on TNA, he's a heel. Is his single...

hehe i saw him on TNA, he's a heel. Is his single his enrtance music? cos i wasn't too fond of that.
Forum: Audio Arena 09-09-2007, 06:30 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 399
Posted By burton.and.gas
thanks for making me green.

thanks for making me green.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-09-2007, 09:08 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 591
Posted By burton.and.gas
It says wanderlust. And, as far as I'm concerned,...

It says wanderlust. And, as far as I'm concerned, metallica suck, and the album that made them the metal band to rub in everyone's is hardly my cup of tea XD.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-09-2007, 05:48 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 591
Posted By burton.and.gas
there's alwasy a lot of typos when i type things,...

there's alwasy a lot of typos when i type things, mainly because i can't type. but thanks for the crit, i'll look it over, im gonna record this soon, keep an eye out in the audio arena.
Forum: Lyrical Challenges 09-08-2007, 09:24 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,178
Posted By burton.and.gas
RunAmok: did i do that? lol now i feel stupid, i...

RunAmok: did i do that? lol now i feel stupid, i was tired at the time i'll look back at it and post some crits.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-07-2007, 04:14 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 469
Posted By burton.and.gas
I am quite into this song dude, tbh. it's sort of...

I am quite into this song dude, tbh. it's sort of good story telling, i'm not adverse to swearing either, but that line is just quite a weak line, sort of remind me of that god awful gallows song...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-07-2007, 03:31 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 591
Posted By burton.and.gas
Thanks for the crit dude, and i dunno what wnet...

Thanks for the crit dude, and i dunno what wnet wrong with my grammar on the where/wear thing, i have an A level in English Language, but thanks for the crit. To answer your question, it's going to...
Forum: Lyrical Challenges 09-06-2007, 05:18 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,173
Posted By burton.and.gas
Lily And Parrots-1 I like this quite a lot! I...

Lily And Parrots-1 I like this quite a lot! I sort of imagine you as a bard on a motorbike when I read this, it sparked my imagination. Maybe there are some issues with it but nothing appears to me....
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-06-2007, 05:13 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 591
Posted By burton.and.gas
someone crit!

someone crit!
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-05-2007, 03:22 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 400
Posted By burton.and.gas
Hmm, bit of a storytelling feel goin on! However,...

Hmm, bit of a storytelling feel goin on! However, it sort of reminded me of a song I used to sing when I went to a chritsian primary school, but more secular. In general i think you've created the...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-05-2007, 03:18 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 398
Posted By burton.and.gas
sort of liked the attitude of the song, but i...

sort of liked the attitude of the song, but i don't think it was well constructed, sort of sounds a bit like a mindless self indulgence song, but not as a ironic etc.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-05-2007, 03:13 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 524
Posted By burton.and.gas
Hmm, interesting concept, my mum's a walker she...

Hmm, interesting concept, my mum's a walker she would love it. However it does appear that you might have had some ideas and put them in where they might not fit. For example, the knapsack line that...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-05-2007, 02:59 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 476
Posted By burton.and.gas
From my p.o.v this song is tehcnically quite well...

From my p.o.v this song is tehcnically quite well constructed, but sort of reeks of cliché. I guess it's like surf said, the metaphor running through the piece is clichéd within itself. However, not...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-05-2007, 02:50 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 591
Posted By burton.and.gas
It's been a while, here's an untitled piece.

Who is tonight's master of wanderlust?
From which we take the fantasy
That tonight's master of ceremony
will flex into a strange story
where we all have four arms and six eyes
without the...
Forum: Lyrical Challenges 08-13-2007, 03:39 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,262
Posted By burton.and.gas
Bigbadbob-3 Lily and Parrots-2 ...

Bigbadbob-3
Lily and Parrots-2
Runamokrampant-1
Forum: Lyrical Challenges 07-22-2007, 10:33 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,020
Posted By burton.and.gas
sorry guys i get the feeling i messed up the last...

sorry guys i get the feeling i messed up the last challenge a little, well at least i won one (wasn't expecting that),i'll vote this time, though im pretty sure i cant compete now cos of the rules.
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