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Forum: Community: Music/Off-Topic 08-02-2013, 09:19 PM
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Posted By Captain North
Sydney based drummer wanted

Im in a hardcore band (think converge meets Isis meets skramz), desperately needing a drummer. If you're interested hit me up. Not expecting a response here but worth a shot
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 06-06-2013, 04:03 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 210
Posted By Captain North
Haha, I actually really like this one.

Haha, I actually really like this one.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 06-04-2013, 09:55 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 291
Posted By Captain North
Pretty ordinary hard rock, but you've got a good...

Pretty ordinary hard rock, but you've got a good voice on you man
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 06-01-2013, 09:33 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 197
Posted By Captain North
Oh god

Oh god
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-28-2013, 08:55 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 189
Posted By Captain North
Yeah I'm not entirely happy about this. It ended...

Yeah I'm not entirely happy about this. It ended up being too much about how shit the perpetrator is. I still haven't quite gotten the right angle on representing the women
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-28-2013, 03:11 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 189
Posted By Captain North
Meat.

Hey scumfuck
Stop what you're doing, she's not meat for the taking
She's not just fragile skin and flesh, the spoils of war
She's a person you dick, living, breathing, loving, hurting
Oh but you...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-24-2013, 07:58 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 339
Posted By Captain North
I didn't mean an on-purpose-parody. Comedy...

I didn't mean an on-purpose-parody. Comedy demands an audience and he seems fine with not having one.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-24-2013, 01:24 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 339
Posted By Captain North
I can't tell if he's being sarcastic (which I...

I can't tell if he's being sarcastic (which I doubt) or he's just a living parody (which he probably is)
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-23-2013, 02:12 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 339
Posted By Captain North
It was more at him than you. I get the poem is...

It was more at him than you. I get the poem is just for shits n giggles
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-22-2013, 06:29 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 339
Posted By Captain North
Mentioning Shakespeare and sonnets doesn't mean...

Mentioning Shakespeare and sonnets doesn't mean this has anything to do with him, or he'll, that he had any influence outside of those two words.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-22-2013, 06:28 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 220
Posted By Captain North
God I hope that was sarcasm Jim. As for the...

God I hope that was sarcasm Jim.

As for the lyrics, I liked it a lot. I love how it switches from hatred at her to self hatred and back again in much the same way our feelings tend to go. I hope...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-16-2013, 10:20 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 169
Posted By Captain North
How is that perverted? There's nothing wrong with...

How is that perverted? There's nothing wrong with having friends on the Internet.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-16-2013, 12:15 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 169
Posted By Captain North
I'm not sure about the friends on the Internet...

I'm not sure about the friends on the Internet bit. For a guy going through the motions he seems to get enjoyment from it.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-14-2013, 10:06 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 331
Posted By Captain North
I wasn't antagonistic until he said that. But...

I wasn't antagonistic until he said that. But yeah, I suppose it belongs to a space and time. Just like a two year old scribbling on a wall belongs to a space and time. That doesn't make it good. I'm...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-14-2013, 12:35 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 331
Posted By Captain North
Because he's a grown man writing shitty poetry...

Because he's a grown man writing shitty poetry and has made literally zero effort to improve over the time he's been posting here. And come on, how is "I don't need to get it, I just need to write...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-13-2013, 09:25 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 331
Posted By Captain North
Um, ok then mate. I seriously don't get why you...

Um, ok then mate. I seriously don't get why you post here
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-11-2013, 06:05 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 331
Posted By Captain North
You talk about cussing, but you're afraid to...

You talk about cussing, but you're afraid to actually swear. I dunno, this seems like a song written about an angry man by someone who doesn't get it
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-26-2013, 05:49 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,585
Posted By Captain North
Yeah fair enough. There's also the fact...

Yeah fair enough.

There's also the fact (admittedly you couldn't have known this) that this is part of a greater whole. A concept album of sorts, and this is right near the end where Im admitting...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-26-2013, 01:06 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,585
Posted By Captain North
Yeah we have very different ideas on lyrics. I...

Yeah we have very different ideas on lyrics. I mean, I can like good music without good lyrics, but as a writer I don't want anything I do to be filler.

And my issues with the way you edited my...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-24-2013, 04:24 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,585
Posted By Captain North
Aside from the fact that the first bit doesn't...

Aside from the fact that the first bit doesn't even make sense, you haven't made this feel good at all. Now it's just a muddled message, and you removed a bunch of my best (and most from the gut)...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-16-2013, 07:06 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,585
Posted By Captain North
Something funny I'd say in real life...? I...

Something funny I'd say in real life...?

I get the criticism for the fourth and fifth stanzas, but the third is probably my favourite part (as is pretty darn personalized) while I didn't think the...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-05-2013, 06:45 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 469
Posted By Captain North
I'm saying they're definitely the sort of thing I...

I'm saying they're definitely the sort of thing I wrote at 14, yes. If you like them, you like them, whatever. Just pointing out I can maybe help
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-05-2013, 07:49 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 469
Posted By Captain North
Some of the stuff I wrote when I was 14 might be...

Some of the stuff I wrote when I was 14 might be up your alley then
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-05-2013, 03:08 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 469
Posted By Captain North
post some examples of what you're looking for....

post some examples of what you're looking for. have a look through some of the stuff I've posted before to see if you like my style. none of them are up for your use, but if you like my writing im...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 03-31-2013, 10:01 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 469
Posted By Captain North
What kind of band?

What kind of band?
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