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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-03-2007, 12:47 PM
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Posted By RollerQueen
I'm writing a novel. I'll be back later on at...

I'm writing a novel. I'll be back later on at some point, maybe once commencement's over in May. Take care, kids.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-01-2007, 12:00 AM
Replies: 7,389
Views: 298,928
Posted By RollerQueen
In case you have forgotten, I hate you all.

In case you have forgotten, I hate you all.
Forum: Guitar 12-21-2006, 08:39 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 478
Posted By RollerQueen
Thanks for informing me about how utterly...

Thanks for informing me about how utterly ignorant I am about all of this. It saves me needless spending.

6V6... Alright. Another local music shop is run by a tube amp specialist. I'll ask him...
Forum: Guitar 12-21-2006, 05:49 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 478
Posted By RollerQueen
EHX Tubes

Hi, anyone who can help. Hi, anyone else. I have a Fender Hot Rod Deluxe (40w 1x12) with its stock white Groove Tubes in and am looking for something hotter, something gutsier. My boss at the...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-29-2006, 09:34 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 389
Posted By RollerQueen
I still can't stand your misuse of punctuation. ...

I still can't stand your misuse of punctuation.

Sad. The only thing that's decent is the couplet, and that still needs some work. The mechanism (swinging back and forth) for both objects is the...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-28-2006, 08:15 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 389
Posted By RollerQueen
You get an exhausted black dot. w00t0rz

You get an exhausted black dot. w00t0rz
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-27-2006, 11:48 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 723
Posted By RollerQueen
It's all good. Your crit has been returned. ...

It's all good. Your crit has been returned. Take care.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-27-2006, 11:48 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 497
Posted By RollerQueen
Hm... This is alright... It seems like you're...

Hm... This is alright... It seems like you're being too intense about it, though. Vocabulary's fine, but do you need to be so elegant with this sort of subject matter? You come off as pompous,...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-27-2006, 08:30 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 723
Posted By RollerQueen
The second verse IS talking about a man whore. I...

The second verse IS talking about a man whore. I don't like talking about politics because almost anyone who takes sides does so with incredibly limited knowledge.

Thanks. Take care. I'll...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-26-2006, 01:36 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 723
Posted By RollerQueen
I'm leaving MX again for a while, so I'll see you...

I'm leaving MX again for a while, so I'll see you people later. Take care. Any final crits for this will be returned, but whatever.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-22-2006, 01:53 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 723
Posted By RollerQueen
Like I said, this is a SIMPLE SONG. I get fed up...

Like I said, this is a SIMPLE SONG. I get fed up with myself and my constant attempts at "serious" subject matter. The lyrics aren't very deep, and the music is just a bunch of chords in the key of...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-22-2006, 01:37 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 417
Posted By RollerQueen
This had no love, so I'll change that... Also,...

This had no love, so I'll change that... Also, you live about 45 minutes away from me, and about 15 minutes from my old house. Weird.

I dont know if it's poetic license or laziness, but the lack...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-20-2006, 09:55 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 723
Posted By RollerQueen
The Merry Highwayman

This is a song about how I got in a fight with some hooker in Philadelphia when I asked her what she was doing with her life and how her current course of actions justifies her future aspirations. ...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-14-2006, 04:20 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 561
Posted By RollerQueen
It's all good, homey. You're not me, and I'm...

It's all good, homey. You're not me, and I'm weird, so it happens. Take care.

Any last ones before I post that other piece that I mentioned in the introductory statement? Kill whitey.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-13-2006, 04:57 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 561
Posted By RollerQueen
Subtle, fair enough. Not ATD-I. It isn't...

Subtle, fair enough.

Not ATD-I. It isn't esoteric enough to be ATD-I.

Yeah, the "circus" thing isn't something that I so much gave a passing thought to in writing this, so bollocks on that. ...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-13-2006, 04:48 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 511
Posted By RollerQueen
Hm........ The apostrophes almost make this...

Hm........

The apostrophes almost make this sound like a country song, and the "deeper" thing does call Dylan to mind, and "Storm" is close to "Hurricane," though this song doesn't seem to be...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-12-2006, 10:57 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 476
Posted By RollerQueen
Hey now... You're making me sad and feel like an...

Hey now... You're making me sad and feel like an idiot.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-12-2006, 02:11 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 561
Posted By RollerQueen
Oh, yeah, that... It's a tension-breaker. If...

Oh, yeah, that... It's a tension-breaker. If you want to be all artsy and complex, the Beatles reference is to acknowledge that it's impossible to permanently change the world. I mean, even Hitler...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-12-2006, 12:25 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 561
Posted By RollerQueen
Thank you... I'll change it a little bit. Maybe...

Thank you... I'll change it a little bit. Maybe I should have "lame" instead of "slain." That would accomplish more for what I intend, as truth is not dead as per this piece... Thanks. I...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-12-2006, 12:19 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 346
Posted By RollerQueen
Hey there. Sorry about our imbroglio and whatnot...

Hey there. Sorry about our imbroglio and whatnot in my old song.

The carpe diem sentiment of the chorus is fair enough, but it doesn't bring anything new to the theme. As a chorus, as a focal...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-12-2006, 12:10 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 271
Posted By RollerQueen
Short piece, short crit? Hm... That first...

Short piece, short crit?

Hm... That first stanza carries a fairly decent sentiment, but perhaps it could be worded differently. It's like you have a skeleton (and that could be said of the whole...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-11-2006, 04:29 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 271
Posted By RollerQueen
Black dot here, then.

Black dot here, then.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-11-2006, 01:33 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 372
Posted By RollerQueen
Blarck daert.

Blarck daert.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-11-2006, 01:24 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 272
Posted By RollerQueen
Wasn't "Smoke Two Joints" a Toys song, anyway? I...

Wasn't "Smoke Two Joints" a Toys song, anyway? I had a version of it on my computer a few years ago, and I forget which came first.

Yeah. This is just too serious (?) for sinsimilla. It's fine...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-10-2006, 07:36 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 272
Posted By RollerQueen
Wow... Bad. I'm sure that you could turn this...

Wow... Bad. I'm sure that you could turn this into a stoned singalong at a coffee house or open mic, but it doesn't have much worth. Potheads have a few anthems, like "Burn One Down" and "Smoke...
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